What I Left behind
a question I often ask myself, going throughthe motions of this wake in life -drunken with memories that leave achesand pains throughout, the residue ofa heartfelt hangover.
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Left me looking for the question, what question? this very short piece hinges on what isn't there...................... or did I miss something? BG
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excellent. This strikes up a precise feeling in me i've experienced many times over. it strikes a nerve with the quick pang of a shattered tooth.Damn those guilt ridden mornings.
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SaxonShadow,thanks for reading... and I thought about making the title more questrion like, but the piece actually unfolded from the thought of thinking about what I left behind, so I thought it would...
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Harmony is so difficult. No shit.You might not related to what I thought about on reading. LOL"There are things in life no money can buy. But they are so expensive." Groucho.C A
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This is attractive- I enjoyed it after several readings, some aloud. Good job.
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very nice work.the unfulfilled soulthe narrator creates an effective picture of a speaker drowning in another lonely morning(mourning)i played with the breaks and tried to remove some of the articles...
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cafolini,yes, harmony can be difficult. Thanks for reading.simonpoet,thanks for reading...Madflirter,thank you as well.Lo QI,thanks, and always feel free to have some fun with my work in my threads....
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